In this early stage it doesn't really make sense to invest in the services of a translator. My writing is the key point where I'm looking for feedback, so once I'm confident in that I'd be happy to make it more accessible to new audiences.
Hi, bit of a problem with the game so far- I can't get the window on itch to expand enough to see all of the text, and even when I shrink the text font size via google settings it still leaves some longer parts cut off.
Here is where I got stuck before changing font sizes:
And here is as far as I can go with it set to very small text:
This might just be an issue on my end, but I'm concerned it might not be possible to play the game like this.
FYI, I'm using Chrome on a Windows 10 computer. I tried refreshing, narrowing the tab window, and zooming in/out, none of which have helped. Maybe consider making the project downloadable so it can have a separate window?
Thanks for letting me know, mate. Never used itch before, so learning as I go right now. I'll check the settings and see what I can do as soon as I can.
Edit: I removed the "[Run in browser]" option so it should just be a tiny little download.
Overall, it's a very nice short bit of horror-themed writing, but I think the paragraphs could use a break or two between some sentences here and there.
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from what I understand it's a text-based game, so it would be nice to have a Portuguese version
In this early stage it doesn't really make sense to invest in the services of a translator. My writing is the key point where I'm looking for feedback, so once I'm confident in that I'd be happy to make it more accessible to new audiences.
I understand my friend, I really liked the game even though it is in its initial phase, it is a game with a promising future
Hi, bit of a problem with the game so far- I can't get the window on itch to expand enough to see all of the text, and even when I shrink the text font size via google settings it still leaves some longer parts cut off.
Here is where I got stuck before changing font sizes:
And here is as far as I can go with it set to very small text:
This might just be an issue on my end, but I'm concerned it might not be possible to play the game like this.
FYI, I'm using Chrome on a Windows 10 computer. I tried refreshing, narrowing the tab window, and zooming in/out, none of which have helped. Maybe consider making the project downloadable so it can have a separate window?
Thanks for letting me know, mate. Never used itch before, so learning as I go right now. I'll check the settings and see what I can do as soon as I can.
Edit: I removed the "[Run in browser]" option so it should just be a tiny little download.
I still don't see a download option or link listed on this page though.
I think there's supposed to be a separate option adding a download link or uploading the game file somewhere that people usually use.
You're right again. XD Apologies. It keeps auto-ticking the box to make it run in browser, I assume because its an html file.
Regardless, I tweaked it and got scroll functionality working at the very least.
Good to see, looks like it's working now!
Overall, it's a very nice short bit of horror-themed writing, but I think the paragraphs could use a break or two between some sentences here and there.
:) Awesome! I'll modify modify those to make it more readable. Thank you again for the feedback.
Are there any passages you would identify as particularly strong or weak?